CHECKLIST – PEER FEEDBACK (by Tristan de Lang)

(extensive & based on my video presentation)

Structure & Organisation

• Clear Introduction: The introduction was clear and immediately showed what the presentation would be about.

• Logical Flow: The order of topics was logical and easy to follow.

• Conclusion: The conclusion summarised the key points effectively.

Engagement with Audience

• Eye Contact: Good eye contact with the camera, looked confident.

• Body Language: Calm posture and appropriate gestures.

• Gestures: Natural, but could show more variation.

• Pacing: At some moments slightly fast, which affected clarity.

• Filler Words: Several "uhh" moments interrupted the smoothness.

Visual Aids

• Slide Quality: Slides were clear and clean.

• Use of Visuals: Presentation was quite minimalistic; could add more visuals to support content.

• Slide Transitions: Smooth and professional.

Delivery & Confidence

• Confidence: Looked prepared and confident.

• Voice Projection: Clear, constant volume.

• Intonation: Good, but occasionally monotone.

• Smoothness of Delivery: Could be smoother overall.

English Language Skills

Pronunciation & Clarity

• Generally clear, but several words could be pronounced more accurately.

Grammar & Structure

• Mostly correct grammar.

• No major language mistakes observed.

Vocabulary & Word Choice

• Appropriate business vocabulary.

• Good range of words.

Fluency & Coherence

• Good flow most of the time, but hesitations broke rhythm occasionally.

Strengths

• Clear structure

• Calm and confident appearance

• Clean and professional slides

• Strong explanation of content

Areas for Improvement

• Pronunciation of specific English words

• Reduce filler words ("uhh")

• Improve smoothness of transitions

• Add more visuals to avoid a minimalistic look

Suggestions

• Practise key difficult words before recording

• Record short test clips to reduce hesitations

• Add visuals such as images, icons or graphs

• Slow down slightly during key sections